I write one word at a time and to be even more technical, a letter at a time. I know, I know, how does that help? It’s all about voice, finding your voice as a writer and finding the voice of each individual character. A friend admitted to me today that he didn’t like my writing when he first read it; he said it was too choppy. Now he says he finds the same scenes compelling. I shot back that it might have been helpful to know there were problems with my writing to begin with! Of course, I had no objectivity when I started my novel. It was the beginning of November and NaNaWriMo was expecting me to hit 1667 word a day – a day! I did (and then some). The result? A semi-completed novel of more than 50,000 words that was in desperate need of editing and re-examination and plot and character development (the list goes on) AND an individual who wanted nothing more than to continue writing and improving her story. Overall? a complete win.
I hardly recognize a lot of the words I wrote just a few months ago. I sit back reading and changing them on a daily basis. Sure, they’re on the page, which of course is the first critical step. However, they lack polish and they lack voice. I’m don’t just mean accent, but the phrases, meanings, colloquialisms and feel all need to ring true. This is actually difficult because while my world is relatively high fantasy the language used intentionally has (a few) swear words in it but is also linguistically high fantasy in spots. Yes, you read correctly, my protagonist swears (I like her better because of it). But, finding the balance in tone is difficult. It takes work and honest feedback from readers.
In order to achieve this I take the advice of those smarter than I am, many of those I read have emphasized the importance of writing every day and so I try to write a little each morning and evening. However, finding time to write can be exhausting. I wake up a little earlier in the morning and start typing away. Depending on how many times I hit the snooze button I get between 30 and 60 minutes to dedicate to writing. Then I write when I get home in the evenings. This part is tricky because I often need time to decompress from work and that inevitably involves the internet. And, what starts happening when you surf the internet? You don’t want to stop surfing the internet. Some days I’m successful in focusing on writing, sometimes I’m not.
When do you write and how are you developing your tone? Have any ticks you want to share? I find having a well-developed world and character are an important place to start. Write your character by herself and figure out how she thinks, feels, and reacts. Who knows, you might use it elsewhere.